Rare stone of Egypt
There was a boy named Krishna - he was an archaeologist - her mother was suffering from a disease - she is going to die - krishna wanted to save her - he heard something about magical stone while working at southern part of India - it had power to cure any disease - he asked about the atone to his teammate Ravi - he told that it was in Egypt and there are lots of treasure and something dangerous - but didn't know exact location - Krishna asked to some people to go with him - Riya and Ayush got ready to go with him - they went there - they wanted a person who knows Egyptian language - they met a man who knew Egyptian - but the man dinied to go - he told there is something dangerous who killed the people - Krishna said that there is lots of gold, diamonds, etc. - the man got ready to go with him - they asked about the stone to the local people - finally they met Naira - she told that his grandfather knows

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ReplyDeleteStarting was good👍
DeleteIt was amazing story but you need to make it more clear in middle part and also work on the ending.
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